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Okay, well, wow. That was very interesting. Your character development is coming along quite nicely. I can understand each of them already, so good job on that. You plot is ...

Chapter 3 Castra We were still in the meadow that surrounded my house-and their apartments- when we heard The Voice. “Castra. Castra. Castra.” It whispered on the wind. “Did anyone ...

ummm, well, they all wanted to have their seperate rooms, so they built an apartment next to my Alexis's House!

Please please please review this!! You'd be doing me an awesome favor! *Puppy dog eyes*

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I drove back to my house. We crashed here all the time, so the girls built their own apartments next to my house. My tires screeched to a stop as ...

*hehehehe.* Wow. That was really good! I didn't see that coming at all!! I saw no grammar mistakes either!!! I think that you should do a second chapter just for ...

I fixed it...I think...maybe not....ughhh

Wow. You had me laughing until there were tears coming out of my eyes. Awesome job!!

Victoria Why did I do that? I asked my self over and over again. He was just a human and I was not thirsty! *Do we really have to go ...

The lights were electrifying as my crew and I walked in. Everyone stopped and turned to stare at us with incredulous eyes. We were used to it. I turned to ...

wow. Thanks guys. Well, chapter one will really explain everything. They are Pixies, so pixies have god like features, so that was why she was confused that the guy wasn't ...

I need the next chapter soon!! Please pm me when you have it up!

Okay, I'm in luv with your story. Stephanie would be jealous..

yay! Esme! Thank you for writing this story! I have spent the whole of tonight reading it!!